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WHEN THE COVANENT ATTACK MY SCHOOL
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Oct 30 2008, 2:13 PM EDT by
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Thread started: Oct 28 2008, 8:35 PM EDT
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this story is about how brave and couragious U.N.S.C soldiers win and lose there lives this story is dedicated to them............. SULUTE!
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Light vs. Dark [story]
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Oct 29 2008, 10:36 PM EDT by
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Thread started: Oct 12 2008, 2:25 PM EDT
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"Come on!!" yelled my best friend, Jim. "Hold on.." I said, "Can't we take a break." Jim and I have been runnig for along time now. "We can't stop or they will catch us!!" said Jim runnig faster then ever. "fine..." I said, then I dashed after him.
You see this all stared about two days ago. A guy followed us after we came home from school. So we started running away, but the guy kept following us. Then two more people came after us with the guy. So we thought we was wanted so we ran out of the town as quietly as possible. "COME ON!!!" yelled Jim waiting for me to climb up the hill. "ok, stop yelling!!" I yelled back. We kept running then we stopped at a village at the outskirts of town.
(comments are a great help, and more to come..)
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RE: Light vs. Dark [story]
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Oct 29 2008, 10:36 PM EDT
When we got there, there was a good amount of weapons on the table. There were assualt rifles, rocket launchers, shotguns, snipers, swords, and other guns. "Well, you can choose up to two one you hold and the other on your back." said Coporal #1. "Well, not really, like, you can have two pistols for a weapon." said #2. "Ok, I want.... the rockets and...." I looked around. "What's this?" I asked as I picked up a weapon. "Oh, that's our silenced uzi." said #1, "It's good, but it's not good in range." "That's ok" I said back. They let me have it. "Now, my turn." said Jim walking around the tables. He picked the sniper and the shotgun. "Good, now let's get back to the Leader." said the first Coporal. We nodded then off we went again.
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The Nameless Realms [story]
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Oct 19 2008, 3:50 AM EDT by
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Thread started: Oct 18 2008, 7:06 AM EDT
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[[This story has no prologue, and is organized in god knows how big chapters xD C&C is always appreciated!!]]
Chapter 1
Rays if sunlight broke through the clouds, illuminating drops of rain falling swiftly to the ground. A girl ran on a wide stone path, her footsteps echoing through the trees. Her face was covered by a large grey hood, protecting her hair and face from the rain. Mud stuck to her shoes and the bottoms of her pants. The stone path broke through the trees and into a large cleaing. In the middle of it was a large two-storey house. Vines crept up the creamy white walls, narrowly avoiding the windows. A black wolf lay in front of the tall mahogany door, its head resting on its paws.
"Grim!" the girl yelled. The wolf opened its eyes and looked at the girl.
"You're late," said a voice in her head.
"I know Grim," the girl said aloud, even though she didn't need to.
"It's not a good first impression." Grim replied, lazily getting up.
"Do you really think I care?" the girl asked. She walked over to the foor and opened it, taking off her shoes before she went in so that she wouldn't make a mess. She pulled her hood back, letting her dark, tangled hair fall out of its hiding place.
"I'm home!" she yelled. She walked into the kitchen, and stopped when she noticed a woman sitting at the table. Straight blonde hair hung down her shoulder, framing her face. Her sparkling blue eyes moved around, inspecting the girl. The woman flashed her a smile.
"Hello Hailey," the woman said. "Do you remember me?"
"Even if I did, I wouldn't want to." Hailey muttured.
"I'm your mother." the woman replied, ignoring Hailey's attitude. Hailey glared at her mother, hatred bubbling up inside of her. I know who you are, she thought. [continued in next post]
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Oct 19 2008, 3:50 AM EDT
[[Thats the end of it. I hate how I can't add just one more line in some posts x.x]]
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Oct 18 2008, 10:29 AM EDT by
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Thread started: Oct 10 2008, 2:38 PM EDT
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This thread is to comment the current featured story. Please keep your comments polite. A little constructive critis is okay, but keep it nice.
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Oct 18 2008, 10:29 AM EDT
Hey eridor, when's the first featured story going to be up, there's four storys now
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Introduction
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Oct 18 2008, 6:53 AM EDT by
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Thread started: Oct 8 2008, 8:38 PM EDT
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Hello, welcome to the Writers' Block. In this thread you may introdice yourself, and give links to some of you stories.
Please keep this thread chat free, and use it only to introduce yourself, and to welcome others to the site.
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Oct 18 2008, 6:53 AM EDT
Hi, I'm Bella!
I was DreamingAboutPokemon on Neoseeker, which is how I found this place.
I'm about to start writing a story now, you'll see it soon =)
And I like cookies :3
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Glory, sweet glory [story]
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Oct 15 2008, 9:06 PM EDT by
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Thread started: Oct 10 2008, 7:52 PM EDT
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A flicker of light went past the building, changing colors as it did so. The police were here, and another job was done. "I couldn't have done it any better." I thought to myself, but little did I know that my biggest challenge was ahead of me.
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